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Comments of chapter undefined of Multiversal Apocalypse: Everybody Can Now Enter Fictional Worlds

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No reason to lie to Mary, either don't clue her in on the info at all or say it's from an ability, that way the organization won't be able to function without you... and saves you a lot of trouble if she is a long term part of the organization, now u won't have to pile lie upon lie. If she's just fodder then I understand just lying... Please be fodder 🙏

DreamCrusher101
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Just because she is a girl he give away his secret why not just kill yourself

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Skaar
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Although I did not like the fact of revealing information about your knowledge, I understand that to create an organization you have to Provide some benefit. I just hope he doesn't reveal everything he knows.

SoulessReaper
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this was poorly done

Suzuha_Yuu
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thanks for the chapter is there gonna be betrayal in his organisation?

IOnlyEatDinner
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No prior information about this girl to justify his decision to lay things out to this girl. Basically in the reader's eyes, this is just giving out so much information and an abrupt recruitment to someone very unfamiliar. This just looks stupid in our eyes.

SCP_UnKnown
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Natsu_Dragonell
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Is anyone going to tell anyone who wants to join the organization? I mean, why would he want to build an organization? He's alone able to complete the tasks. Let's get sick of taking someone with him for one piece. Will this person be able to withstand the difficulties of training? And the horrors of this world. And the Mc will have to explain everything. And when he gets into a fight, he's going to lose, and the Mc has to save him. I'd rather the McS stay alone, assuming that one of the members published the fact that the leader knows the information of the worlds and Then it's going to be a war. Because when they call anyone, they need to tell them their secrets. Like I said, I'd rather have a solo mc because it's going to save a lot of trouble. And mixed plot. And should you have made the first person to invite him a woman? And let's say why he agreed to her request. From these events, I know where this fan fic is headed.

BJ1869
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thanks for the chapter

95_novel_maniac_95
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thanks for the chapter 👍

TheTarnishedHollow
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Thanks for the chapter.

KillingmeSoftly
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thanks for the chapter.

ediwow35
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Moreeeeeeeeee

Wandering_Swordman
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