Comments of chapter undefined of Our Fate and Destiny

Thanks for the chapter mate! Btw are you looking for an editor by any chance? I can't promise I'll do it with any sort of regularity and won't ditch you once the school starts, but I feel that your story could reach a much wider audience if some errors were to smoothen out. If you're not interested in that I'd recommend you download grammarly their algorythm is pretty good at fixing common errors and is free.