Comments of chapter undefined of Hell Unearthed

wow ... he had it tough .... does he has the same appearance that in Earth? or is he a kind of monster?

Well this is awesome! I love the world building. The 5'4 ft girl seems to be an interesting character! Can't wait to dig in😘 But I noticed a mistake that occurred frequently. I would advice you to separate the characters' dialogue from each other instead of putting different characters' dialogue in a paragraph. It helps reading understandable.

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