Wahi
Could you please change you're synopsis because the way it currently is, it tells us nothing but that he reincarnates and tries to gain immortality. His death is not interesting for the rest of the story it tells me nothing about how good the book will be or what awaits me, the tags currently don't tell me more either besides him going on an adventure, it could be cultivation or magic or something else entirely. I simply have nothing to go on as such I'm less likely to read this book (a day only has 24 hours after all) and it be a pity if a potential great book suffered unduly especially in the beginning where there are no reviews it can seriously hamper a books growth