KaiserKen
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the dialog is annoying as fk.
Too much punctuation
something just feels fishy
Man, Pete is the worst. I think you may have gone too far, author. Like the wisdom of Tropic Thunder, "You never go full r-----." I think you shouldn't go full p.o.s. with the MC. I kinda just want him and Aisling to both die and call it a day.
How many women are in his harem
