Comments of chapter undefined of Immortality System: The Last Human's Transmigration

the writing style is very wierd its confusing i feel like the pov's are messed up and its very hard to read

Has a good premise

your writing has me confused as f##k

Okay I haven’t even read a single word yet but I just wanted to thank the author for clearly writing in the description that there would be no harem - after all the times I’ve had to check reviews or the authors ”pros/cons” list (or the times I forgot to check and wasted minutes of my life reading the novel before I realised) - I appreciate the simplicity very very much 😌😤

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

I'll read more I guess

Good ch! I will read more!

very bad writing and MTL

the writing needs some tweaking

I don't like 1st pov story but I'll continue

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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

Dropped why? Because I hate Mc's that are just a pawn, it got worse for humanity hahahahaha