Comments of chapter undefined of Humanity's Greatest Mecha Warrior System

This is like reading a summary of everything that's happening there is not a lot of dialogue and lots of missed opportunity for to introduce characters personality and development I barley even know anything about him that's not been summarized in a long paragraph I can't infer what his character is like when he barley had any conversation with anyone.

Is it me or does everything just seem like it is flying at your face and you know and don’t know what’s going on

Your writing needs dialogue of conversation,or your students characters are all mute? Man this novel need conversations. I felt like I am reading a packing JOURNAL DIARY.

Gracias - Thanks

thx for the chapter 😻

I thank you for the chapter.

To verify a few non important details?