It's good that you posted this considering the state you were in. I hope you can have more confidence from now on Author. Us readers have always believed in you. Please no more running away.
This first chapter is emotionally powerful. It's a nice start and it will attract more readers.
interesting start. this is something that I need to read more as it seems that there is more than meets the eye. Can't wait to continue, Partner š„°š„°š„°