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You really have a bad habbit for not finishing your fics

I look forward to kais return so take your time

sounds good, I love the setting and can't wait to see a fully fleshed out version of it

my heart crack it seemed like an awesome power fantasy don't change the power system too much and Mystique can be a good plot point for a character too

Splendid. Just hope the new version comes out soon

As sad as I am to see this having stopped updating, I hope and trust that the redo will make it even better!

sounds good

The setting here is great in my personal opinion and you should definitely keep working on it. There are definitely some clunky parts like how he basically gets a whole new spell when he casts magic missile purely because he's familiar with it and the health and mana system could probably use some retooling if you can kill anything by taking off its head (which makes perfect sense in real life but not as much in a game setting that the early part of this story coincides with) then why have a health system. That said this is definitely some excellent story telling and I'm looking forward to more of it.

can't wait, I'm looking forward to it

looking forward to it. Good luck author

are u going to rerelease anytime soon

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