Crazy_Penguin
turning into a vampire was just pure stupid and made no sense also if I remember correctly hp vampires can't use wizard magic it literally feels like your just spitting out your a** coming up with stuff now and your just getting more blunt in implementing plot points instead of a journey with scenery it's almost pure straight line from A to B
Good chapter. You should make it so he became a devouring creature that assimilates other creatures it devours gaining all their skills and powers. Also the magicians from the HP universe are very unique in general, you can say that they are descendants of the Supreme magical race the Magus race, but after their catastrophe many knowledge was lost and their bloodline diluted and lost its power