Comments of chapter undefined of The Reddest Red

I like the mistry, really curious to see what happens next 😉😉

mystery? Men, I feel thrills running down my spine... Is that sentence even grammatically correct?? Lol... but seriously, it's cool

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This is interesting, intriguing and frightening at the same time.

This story is a little unique. Exactly what is going on here intrigues me greatly. So far, I'm really enjoying this book. Fantastic job, author🤗

An interesting opening...!

it seems that the heroine got into a strange story. And it is not clear what awaits her in the future. One thing is obvious- staying in such a place can be dangerous.

boom! I love this story 💕👍

I really like this book so far. Great job author💯

Bruh... she's an SCP o_o

How can the girl remember the boy's words if her memory was wiped?.

This is a rather unusual narrative. I'm really curious to know what's going on here at all?

The important thing is the idea that you present in your own words, before your grammar or your writing technique does not have other standards. Leave work for oteos, editors, proofreaders... for the readers themselves. You keep writing, with experience, age, some courses... and read the best. Your masterpiece will come.

wow the theatre is full of mystery

Try to incorporate 'show, don't tell' and if you carefully re-read several paragraphs, you'd find that you could separate the long sentences into several short ones to make them more interesting and not long-winded. Apart from that, the mystery does bring curiosity to the readers

Too vague but neat and interesting as well...

Making me curious to know more...

Yeah I will

Curious to see what happens next in the story...👀😁