Comments of chapter undefined of DC: God of Momentum

Thank you,but can we get back to omen now?

preciate the chapter, & most stories i have read always end up going bad when it comes to clones so i hope this clone thing you tryin to make work doesn’t end it ruining the story & i hope Omen stays as the original .

bye I hate clones

Thank you, but I have a question. Will we be following both Omen and Rai as main characters now, or will this be kind of a one-off?

As long as omen stays as the prime I'll remain optimistic. Not a great direction if I'm honest. Makes it more convoluted since if rai wins he would essentially become the prime.

Are u going to download more today since U forgot to download before.

So rai is the mc got it.

Thanks for the chapter but the whole clone thing scares me. Everysingle story that has seinteint clones ends badly. As long as omen ends up being the one and only version of him then things will be fine.

Great chapter Can you upload more chapters today

Not gonna lie. This chapter is a deal breaker, usually when clones get involved it ruins a story. So imma stop reading here to save myself the time. But maybe you'll make it work, I don't know. But good luck with your future writing.

thx for the chap

This was so boring. The power creep makes me think this story is going to go nowhere. It's not interesting if he's too powerful, unless you're really really good at comedy and parody (most professional writers are not). Omen needs to get back down to earth (mentally) so he can start being interesting again. His "I'm a god above all of you" attitude makes any relationship he has with anyone, platonic or otherwise, seem unrealistic at best, horribly forced most likely. It doesn't feel like anything can happen because none of the other characters can be themselves while the main character retains his personality. Most DC characters would probably hate him if they interacted.

God +10👍👍👍😎

Awesome