Comments of chapter undefined of The Sun - Lord of Mysteries

The Sun - Lord of Mysteries

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Daoist509080Lv2Daoist509080

Tbh, I prefer 3rd person. It's not a matter of skill but these character are really difficult to write the thoughts and feelings of in a really satisfactory way without revealing too much of the mystery upfront(show not tell sort of thing). I mean there's probably a reason why Cuttlefish himself only ever did one 1st person chapter in the whole series. He even explained that he wouldn't give Roselle a 1st person narrative because he would be a menace to write and that he is more effective from an onlookers view. Still, it was a very enjoyable chapter as always. Do what you want and if you want to try something new, I'd read regardless. Thanks

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BatcardLv14Batcard

I enjoyed the third person. Don’t mind the first person either so whatever works for you.

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TheSystemFanLv5TheSystemFan

Whatever you prefer. We love it anyway.

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IKSHANALv2IKSHANA

Thanks for the chapter and you do you author it's your call

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KurooofLv4Kurooof

Thank you for the update Kudos for you dear author 💕

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LastsonofZodLv4LastsonofZod

Thanks for the chapter!

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Chunchunmaru_LordLv4Chunchunmaru_Lord

thanks for chapter..

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ThousandRainLv11ThousandRain

I don't know why I really don't like the first-person POV in every other novel. I prefer the third point of view. That example could ruin a story character like amon. I know he's a unique character so when you write it with the first point of view it feels weird and destroys his charm

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