Comments of chapter undefined of Isekai Journey Of The Magic Archer

Extremly cringe

lol

👏

sometimes I just want a cup of cliche. and I'm waiting for my glass to be filled

guess

See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule

test!!!

Found this story by complete accident. Let's see how it goes.

OH NO our guy was reincarnated as a NPC!!!!!

we can truly feel the ML's emotions through all the twists and turns🤞 good work author😊

It's about an archer, of course it's gonna be good! Nice start!

The story is okay so far, but umm... if you accept constructive criticism, maybe level up your vocabulary? You use the word 'gentle' to describe almost everything in this first chapter, Author-sama. And likening something to be like background music only worked well the first time. I don't know if this is the case, but if English isn't your first language, don't worry, you can still look up synonyms and such online. I'm looking forward to read your story though! Keep at it!

good first chapter. let's see how the restart will be

Here's the list of all the misspelled words in this novel I remember so far:(misspelled -> correct)pry -> preysolder -> soldierrelay -> relyflow -> flaw

very good and beautiful syory

So, I like how this chapter came out. The main character had lost their parents at a young age, so they didn't know what it was like to have parents, and now that they've reincarnated, they have one of the things they'd been missing their entire life, and they're happy about it. I honestly like it. Nice beginning to this 👍

looks promising though... keep it up 😉

Nice

I don’t care just make the rest of story interesting

it ’s a good start!! Keep it up author!! 💪🏻💪🏻💪🏻