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i think the author went wrong in the choice os first music. In our world all classic hip hop and rap artists came from a background of gangs and crime, often served time in jail. with the MC being a gangter himself and wanting to let go of this life, i would have chose a song that reflected that, like "gangsta paradise" i think it would fit better than loseyourself. Lose youself could come after this initial fame he would gather.