Comments of chapter undefined of The Last Rising Sun (Assassin)

Although Hokage and Elders might be surprise of MC taking down Jounin lvl ninja but they won’t take it seriously , they’ll think MC just caught the enemy off guard and enemy underestimated MC , not mention MC kept his talent and strength hidden during the academy

well for now it's pretty good author and now ino know what it's mean to be a shinobi

this is the worst Ino I've come across

Thanks for the chapter

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Thanks for chapter

eu acho que o protagonista tem muito oque melhorar, ele varias vezes é muito pouco interessante, porem acho que esse capitulo foi fantástico e muito bem escrito provando que você autor, pode desenvolver um protagonista sim, acho que ele só precisa de amor pra perceber sozinho as coisas sozinho quando chegar a hora, ele parece muito adolescente nervoso nesse capitulo ou seja muito infantil.

Essa fanfic está ótimo

I know there's a debate on how much show vs tell is needed, but you can't just write 'wind sounds' and leave it at that. the asterisk sound asterisk habit that some people are getting into is just lazy writing. secondly, are you telling me that in a life or death conflict that someone is taking their time to say out loud the name of their next move, which will clue in the opponent about what it is?