Comments of chapter undefined of RWBY, How Strange Reversed World! SI!

try not to always use after each sentence of the characters X said or X said, if you are going to put it in each sentence it can become a bit annoying to read, simply because of the context of the sentence you already know who is speaking, so you can say, murmur, shout, whisper, that kind of thing to know the emphasis that he put on the sentence and of course when he speaks normally you can put said, but if you put it in each sentence as I said before it can become very repetitive and annoying