OpSig
Can't believe it's fifty chapters already. I feel like I've only been reading for a bit. Now you gotta target 100 chapters. I really like your story so far, there's nothing really worth complaining about except the grammar here and there but it doesn't really impede the reading experience. Also you can try to make the atmosphere, feeling and the interaction more grounded/real coz sometimes it's a bit nonsense. Also MC tendency to treat every single younger girl he meets as his little sister and how he needs to hold back his urge to pat them is really nonsense. Counting his previous life age he's older than even Taeyeon etc so why doesn't he struggle to hold back on his sunbaes? Also he only pat Irene on the head before this, no one else, it's not even that long so I don't think it's such a serious habit. So that's that. I hope you'll show MC and his group members struggling with their new schedule later, how it's tiring etc. With how they need to practice, shoot MV, shoot dance version and other version etc, interview, promotion, meetings with their concept director, photoshoot, running around promoting their songs and group itself.