Comments of chapter undefined of I Can Upgrade My Talent In Everything

heaving up and down .. is diff from caving in..when your chest caved in . it just means that your sternum is broken .. owls sound like whoo . kroo kroo kroo is for ravens. stick to one language . instead of stances and kata.. use stances and forms... you used kata for the word form which it is not mind you.. Kata is more of showing the memorization of certain movements... a lot of Jargons.. this makes the piece not reader friendly and as a practitioner... I believe that it is not the stances and forms that differs from style to style.. it is their overall approach and execution that varies ..