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Comments of chapter undefined of Black Exodia

Blue_Robin
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Don't worry about the writing style. It's good, and I have no faults with it. Also it's been over a hundred chapters and Shoya is just an emperor in name. Having been through this journey with you it's had it's ups and downs, and Shoya has been constant in his abilities. For someone called an emperor, he is exceptionally weak. I don't ever feel like I'm reading about an emperor or a teenager with responsibilities beyond his years. I feel like I am reading about the others. They are more interesting more often then not. Not just because they feel like they have more weight to their blows, but because they grow at a pace I like more. Now mind you, this is one guys personal opinion. I know it might sound presumptuous or arrogant but it's happened before and I don't take chances. Don't make changes based on what I said. You don't even have to think about it if you want to. But if you happen to see something in my words, keep them in mind.

VoidEX
VoidEXAuthorVoidEX

Thanks! This comment ultimately just made my day by hearing a reader's opinion. I'll be sure to keep your words in mind.