LesserCodex
Interesting story so far, but I feel like it's too narrow and fast. Everyone feels practically like a background character except for Eiji and Mina. Not even sure about Deku. I think now's a good time to be exploring the other characters. It feels too 1-dimensional right now. We don't even know what Eiji's friend group is now. Is he still with some people of the Bakusquad, did he reach out to others? Just not enough detail, really.