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Comments of chapter undefined of A Jedi Reborn: A Star Wars Story

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AriaLux
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Its good at the beginning, not until I suddenly got confused on the MC's gender 😅😂 Grammar mistakes is noticeable as well as missing punctuation marks, making it a little bit confusing if you don't mind it. But all in all, its a great start. 😆

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FTLnovaKid
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It was an alright first chapter. Did not notice many grammer mistakes so that is a good start.

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BJ1869
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thanks for the chapter