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PhilVictorovich
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Thanks but is the MC evil, neutral, good or what?

SIENDONIA:Fine, Kim Hajun was an ordinary boy at first, but as soon as his mother left him, his father began to educate him hard to be his successor. After growing up and being on a mission to exterminate a yakuza clan, he found a woman who had been tried to kill him, but the woman (Park Yun Hee) say she wanted to quit he job and become an ordinary woman, and somehow he starts to grow the good side of humans in the wrong way. And... Since I decided to make this book in first-person point of view, there will be a lot of unpredictable plot twists in it

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yas

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Celceus
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Nice chapter but just gotta say the flow is a lil chunky while reading. Feels like a child listing off the things they've done during the day to their parents rather than how a chapter from a novel should sound. Other than that it's great, great wording and grammar, only a few typos:)

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Nickjr321
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Thanks for the chap

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Rayne_Rue
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intriguing

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Interesting chap.

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