Charlie_Sowern
Okay, few things about the chapter, the grammar was good, there were some mistakes/typos, but they were mostly a missing letter or a wrong letter at some point, so no big deal and there weren't many of them either. The chapter itself was quite well written, granted it's only one chapter, but still, it's a good start. I also like the the mc, though it would be good to have a prologue or something, to actually explain if the mc is reincarnated or whatever, also if she has wishes/abilities etc, would be good to get an explanation on those. Anyway thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work.