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Comments of chapter undefined of Traversing The Omni-Realities

Daoistk8C2y3
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two chapters in one day

Fellbane
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Try not to fall into the habit of repeating things multiple times per chapter like most Wuxia and Xianxia fanfics do. We know he is handsome and has a scholarly aura, we know he is strong, we know he wets panties everywhere he goes but you don’t have to try and find 5 different ways to say that per chapter. It may be a cheap way to increase wordcount but its unnecessarily irritating for readers

OnlyTheTip
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I will improve that with time and experience...remember am also writing over 1k word count. Anyway thanks for the concern

Uncertainty
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Will mc just laze around and not gain strength? Is this mostly gonna be an adventure/Slice of life ff? Also Add qianye yinger to harem,( i haven’t seen a ff where she is in the harem and mc doesn’t go Sora mode)

Daoistk8C2y3
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we should reduce the Chinese protagonist situations (the main character is attacked by an arrogant young master)

Daoistk8C2y3
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why don't we give him a mysterious identity, just like ' the watcher of destiny', appears in places where destiny gathers.

Zenon00125
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mc hehe

Allen_Danels
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Please, reduce the 'met a beautiful girl by accident's cliche moments. Build up your story so that you won't be categorized in the same level as most harem fanfic authors. That's why people get tired and irritated of them, like I am starting to be.

OnlyTheTip
OnlyTheTipAuthorOnlyTheTip

I don't want to mess with time history. I can just come up with a skill to influence the mind

iLoveHarem_S2
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Kill yun che

Elysia_02
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Well since Mc has the Space-Time Skill, can he create an identity from the past so that he doesn't become a person without History that suddenly appears

Alpha_Ace
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Exp

please_be_gentle_
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just kill scum che Reason: no particular reason just u don't like him cuz it's a strong eat weak world no one's gonna complain

RaijinGod
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Keep up the good work and thanks for the chapter. 😁👍

jeanpierregerardo
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more chapter

Daoistk8C2y3
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make the chapter longer

DARK_SAGE
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Keep going please 🤩

Random_Entity
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hope he recreates Ultra Instinct (:

Khors
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👍

RaKo
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Gracias por el capitulo autor~san ♡😁