amazing fight, I recommend a bit more dialogue and a bit less narration, the flow of the fight was great but could be better, maybe having more reactions from the enemies at his power and more questiona and such would be better
I recommend the mc to study. it still baffles me how he never did try to study when he was a child. you keep making reasons about his stupidity but not once tried to make the mc study so he isn't clueless on anything.
