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Thank you for your response author! The grammar can be right after spell check, but the wrong word choices not. What I mean is like pull/put, frequently used in opposite meaning. And similar word mixups are frequent. I'd happy to volunteer to be an editor for you, because the story is intriguing otherwise.
Yeah, it's weird. Like for about 5 month of writing "IT TAKES ETERNITY" I never had any need of help with the plot, so this part is usele3. And as for the grammar. The first one told me that she's too busy so she can't read the work so I doubts she'd be able to help with grammarđ . That's too weird and complicated so I'm doing everything I can on my ownđ
CunningManx:That's weird. It should be their job to help you in that, but I guess they're too busy, or just too many to do. But also it's two different thing to help with the plot and with the final product's grammar and wording.