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Comments of chapter undefined of "IT TAKES ETERNITY"

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"IT TAKES ETERNITY"

_Himari_Nora_

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CunningManx
CunningManxLv14CunningManx

Too bad for the bad grammar and bad English... The story would be interesting but bad writing takes the fun away. Some minimal editing would fix that.

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All the chapters are checked with Grammarly app and additional app installed to the Opera browser. However, sometimes the chapters were written from other sources.

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go_kizy
go_kizyLv3go_kizy

its so good to see markus being so protective for Aurora

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CunningManx
CunningManxLv14CunningManx

Thank you for your response author! The grammar can be right after spell check, but the wrong word choices not. What I mean is like pull/put, frequently used in opposite meaning. And similar word mixups are frequent. I'd happy to volunteer to be an editor for you, because the story is intriguing otherwise.

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