Comments of chapter undefined of MMORPG: Rebirth as an Alchemist

I like his many stories at same time

I feel like you've got too many storylines active at the same time

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I like these different perspectives. I think as a videogame novel important to take it slow and flesh it out. A lot of novels I read of this genre tend to focus more on the MC and fighting hardly describing the environment and scenery which is just as exciting. If this game is meant to be a second world to people then I want to read about this world the environment, towns, life styles not just fighting and guild battles.

i think Michael and Lily shouls get together. They are like the Umbridge of this story. Even the main villian is not as unlikeable as these two thanks for the chapter

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She should a Veil to hide her face.