Comments of chapter undefined of Military System In Isekai Of Magic

Since he’s only one to hear the system why not use different quote marks like [ ]. Nice start btw. Cheers

what a low iq for an so called special force, the elite of elite force

I really like the fact that the system is tailored to speak militaristic-like, instead of the default "ding! i am the system"

Nice start 👌

Start looks good

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I like how you set the stage for the objective. I also love how you used a detectable rabbit to cause an ambush as well. As someone did mention, since there's a system directly talking to him, either quotation marks, an italics or a combination of the two would suffice! Good work thus far.

Podria mejorar. Me hubiera gustado que fuera un otaku del anime para ser más interesante dentro de un isekai. El militar no es muy conciente de si mismo con el sistema y baja muchos puntos en mi opinión. 7/10 aunque es interesante no es perfecto. 7 por la personalidad del mc y su falta de conocimiento del systema.

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good

Thanks for the chap

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

how interesting

Do you have a discord for this?

this story is not for me but for people who it is for I hope you enjoy it.

Thanks for the chapter!