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Comments of chapter undefined of Guild Management (Fairy Tail AU)

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Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv15Blood_Prince

Love this fan fic. Best fairy tail fan fic I’ve read so far. I like the future locki revealing himself and saying a few things. Gives mc locki perspective on certaim events and a few other things. Only problem is it creates a bit of a paradox in the time line. So now technically ”ghost” due to changing things in the past to make things easier for mc locki and giving him things and people to help, would either have to be from an alternate timeline, or eventually locki himself will travel back in time which honestly I don’t think you should do. (Also means “ghost” went through the exact same things as locki)

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Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv15Blood_Prince

So you’ve got two choices, you can either have: 1: time loop where he goes back into the past as well and must do certain things the same as what he remembers ghost doing. Or 2: locki going to the past and then changing certain things created a seperate time line. Kinda like in original fairy tail with the eclipse gate theres 3 timelines (1 original where future Lucy comes from, which her going back made a seperate timeline, 2 where future rogue comes from the future, which makes a new timeline, and 3 when they destroy the eclips gate making a whole new one again, though I believe everytime they travel the timeline there from is erased and the new time line takes its place.) If you go with with the time loop I would suggest not using the eclipse gate it would send him to far back and I doubt he would still remember things from the current time. Instead I would have him touch someone when they use the memory days book to go to the past and he gets left there maybe a couple years before lockis birth. Other than that I can’t thi knof anything for the time loop situation. As for the second option time lines is the one I suggest you go with, ghost’s time was different and much harder, explains how he lost his arm, he did everything he could to survive and he did, lost a lot of people because of it, he got stronger quicker because of it but it was at a cost. In the end though someone lets say tried to use the memory days book to go back and kill young locki before he grew to power, ghost found out, went to kill the guy and got sent back into the past with him and got stuck so he decided to change some things for his younger self when he realised he couldn’t go back to his time. Honestly this option would work better I believe. Though it is your novel and the choice is yours either way I’ll continue to read

Dabombd1g1t1:Fair, I think I can see your concerns. Do you have any suggestions if I do decide to throw Locki into the past as Ghost? Or should I scrap that idea entirely?

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5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter As a reader I too feel mixed about future Loki revealing himself: on one hand we were practically sure of who he was so why bother being all vague; on the other this chapter didn't really add much information (apart from a possible spoiler with the metal arm). Still, thanks again for posting your work

Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

Thanks for the chap!!!