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Comments of chapter undefined of Guild Management (Fairy Tail AU)

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Blood_Prince
Blood_PrinceLv15Blood_Prince

Love this fan fic. Best fairy tail fan fic I’ve read so far. I like the future locki revealing himself and saying a few things. Gives mc locki perspective on certaim events and a few other things. Only problem is it creates a bit of a paradox in the time line. So now technically ”ghost” due to changing things in the past to make things easier for mc locki and giving him things and people to help, would either have to be from an alternate timeline, or eventually locki himself will travel back in time which honestly I don’t think you should do. (Also means “ghost” went through the exact same things as locki)

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5paghetti_5auce
5paghetti_5auceLv145paghetti_5auce

thanks for the chapter As a reader I too feel mixed about future Loki revealing himself: on one hand we were practically sure of who he was so why bother being all vague; on the other this chapter didn't really add much information (apart from a possible spoiler with the metal arm). Still, thanks again for posting your work

Hanni_Baal
Hanni_BaalLv4Hanni_Baal

Thanks for the chap!!!