Comments of chapter undefined of Peaky Blinders: The Mafia System[HIATUS]

your novel was great I think your just been to hard on your self.

Its ashame really enjoyed it a lot but your choice in the end hope to see some more writing from you soon beit this or something else

bruh... waaaaaah i want it back!!! COME BACK SOON!! I, Young Master Ying command you to stay!! HERECTIC! jk man. Just stay well and dont stress out.

A story about a protagonist who travels between worlds of horror or survival would be nice, like "Jigsaw" "the ring" "squid Game" "it" "final destination" "Friday the 13th" "Truth or Dare" "doctor sleep" A protagonist who travels or lives or reincarnates in a world where all the horror movies are real, and gets some kind of system that rewards him every time he survives every test

u can al least give this novel to some else to continue it

this has to be a joke right?

Wrote fanfiction and screwed up. well done, I advise you not to start a new one

Well, I understand it. But do not delete it. Because I suppose you just took too high temp. I had definitely alike trouble with my FF about Game of Theones. Now, after three months I'm writing the new chapter. У меня такая же проблема с фанфиком по Игре Престолов на фикбуке. Я писал много и перегорел. и сейчас, спустя три месяца - у меня наконец руки дошли. так что попробуй переключиться и найти вдохновение для новой работы. Как говорится: смена деятельности - лучший отдых .

just don't erase the chapters, keep them there so people can still read or re-read them. I honestly enjoyed the story, and was looking forward to Victor/Viktor expand his Romanov Family to have a rather big infleunce on the world, up to modern times.

Rewrite it but without the system. Just a standard Self-insert. The complexity of system writing was going to cause burnout eventually. It almost always does.

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it's good tho i wish you would continue this :(

Meh, Another that bites the dust

This story was 5star book and so much potential achieve Greatness but 😞sadly that not gonna happen now