Comments of chapter undefined of Peaky Blinders: The Mafia System[HIATUS]

I'm not leaving him! I'm writing it at this point in time while simultaneously stuffing instant noodles into my mouth. I just feel that too many people have different views on my creativity and ideas in this fanfiction.. And like a fool, I'm trying to take note of it, completely losing my pace and my own ideas. Why does the story become crumpled and messy in places, since it is impossible to cram everything in as it usually turns out, moreover, so that everything looks beautiful.

please don't leave this, I really enjoy reading your fanfic

go ahead take we will be waiting for your return

Take the break you need then when you are rested you can write with a clear mind again

when will you come back? ...... or will you leave this fanfiction forever

kill me I don't want to live anymore this was my save and grace every day but now it's almost dropped or not I don't know but the thought of it kills me a million times where will I put my power stones now this was my favorite FF to give power stones to I am even rank 8 😭😭😭

Em don’t care about the plot holes it’s a good story.

Maybe this comment makes you feel good. These days, for me, there have only been bad fanfics on the site, either because the author dropped the story or because the story itself is very bad, but yours is an exception. Of course... that's if you don't drop the story suddenly. Just do what you've been doing, write what you've been writing, as long as it makes sense, I accept.

🤷🏾‍♂️..

Author, altough you are not proefficient in english writting, i absolutely love you story, so please, dont mind the errors you make, its all part of the bigger picture, the growth. Thank you for entertaining me this past hours i spent reading your Fan-Fic, its been an amazing time, and im here for more chapters to come!

Have a great break!! And please don't drop this story. I'm going to be perfect honest with you are better at writing in English then like 80-90% of the people on this site!! Be proud of the masterpiece that you have created!! Sorry for going overboard but I love this story and what you've done with it!

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It’s a good story the chapters could be longer but it’a a good story with potential. The point where things went wrong was where you wanted him to join the Shelby family at that point things became ridiculous and made everything about the mc seem fake as he grew up a Romonav and has his own family and men who he leads and who count on him but you was gonna make him abandon what he has built to join a family who has done nothing for him, pointed a gun at his girl and who just expect him to join them. His answer should have been no and he should stick to creating his own family/organisation… But it’s you story do what you feel the only thing I can do is leave my opinion or stop reading

Aslong as you dont drop the fic we will wait for the next chapter

Thanks

No te preocupes, tómate tu tiempo. Esperamos tu regreso.

take your time author