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Comments of chapter undefined of Peaky Blinders: The Mafia System[HIATUS]

Sinr_089
Sinr_089Lv4Sinr_089

SMH.He has his own crew right?I don't understand the point joining the Shelby crew.Or is he only being a part of the family? Hopefully you develop the MC independently.No point in going along with the plot just for the sake of it. Anyway besides the confusing chapter this is great writing.

40028922
40028922Lv140028922

Thomas didn't protect his own wife, will he protect the MC's wife? LOL

Stoner_friendly
Stoner_friendlyLv13Stoner_friendly

was a good story until this chapter, he was never apart of the family and he's going to trust they'll protect his wife when they can't protect they're own disappointed, I'm out

Hyuga_Tobirama
Hyuga_TobiramaLv5Hyuga_Tobirama

Yep this is nonsense… How can he return to a family he was never part of lol what a joke I’m out. Good luck with this story

Dao_of_Ignorance
Dao_of_IgnoranceLv12Dao_of_Ignorance

Hey author, i understand that it's difficult to write a story about a series, but we're at chapter 34 now and we don't even know what the Mc's goals are and how he wants to achieve them. We get too little information, for example which mission he received for which he felt it necessary to risk his life or whether the hp he used for the potion is gone permanently or only temporarily.I feel like I'm getting a synopsis of a story and not the story itself.But it's a good story if you don factor in the above.Sorry for my bad english.

Htun_Linn_Ko
Htun_Linn_KoLv13Htun_Linn_Ko

Funny Mc don’t have goal and become someone lackery and have to ask someone to protect his own wife

iLoveHarem_S2
iLoveHarem_S2Lv2iLoveHarem_S2

DROPPED

DiosQuieraLucir
DiosQuieraLucirLv1DiosQuieraLucir

An alliance would be a better decision. I don't think choosing to join the Shelby family for Emilia's protection was a good idea, it seems like a forced decision. It just doesn't match Viktor's personality,

eyesofsky
eyesofskyLv5eyesofsky

Inutil abandono esta novela bye

KingYasser
KingYasserLv15KingYasser

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Gilgamesh_Official
Gilgamesh_OfficialLv4Gilgamesh_Official

Yall saying your dropping, are just meh... instead you could apreciatte the hard work of the Author and try to see what will happen in the future, but alas, i cant judge anyone.

_oinkchan
_oinkchanLv5_oinkchan

ty, let's see how this progresses.

Lvec
LvecLv4Lvec

TFTC

Azoozy_king1
Azoozy_king1Lv2Azoozy_king1

Thank you keep up The good work

Dark_Soulsbestgame
Dark_SoulsbestgameLv4Dark_Soulsbestgame

Nice

LuciMorningstar
LuciMorningstarLv4LuciMorningstar

Ooo am gett excit just thinking of what your going to doeding

Sincero_Vz7
Sincero_Vz7Lv2Sincero_Vz7

Good chapter, continue amigo

Dark_knight2157
Dark_knight2157Lv14Dark_knight2157

More

Trouxa_157
Trouxa_157Lv3Trouxa_157

+1??

LoyalCultivator
LoyalCultivatorLv4LoyalCultivator

Thx for the chapter