Comments of chapter undefined of Peaky Blinders: The Mafia System[HIATUS]

So i think these 4 chapters should have been in a prologue. At least that's what i think.

His decisions, commands and equipment make no sense. I guess I'll just leave it to fanfic logic...

Please dont just have him follow around the brothers and do things for himself.

Thanks for the chap

hey author why are you giving - behind every sentence mc is speaking ?

This is wierd. Why do u use ’‘ to show his thought when it is his perspective you are writing from?

I didn't watch the series, should I be worried?

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

Thanks for the chapter nice intro

thanks for the chapter

Obrigado pelo capitulo

Ojala salga un nuevo cap

Thanks

one more chapter please