Comments of chapter undefined of Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)

Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)

Fallen_Angelss

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callMeDaddyLv3callMeDaddy

it looks like a promising story. I'll advise to get a proofreader to eliminate the errors in the story

1yr

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callMeDaddyLv3callMeDaddy

if you can get the grammarly app it should prove useful

Fallen_Angelss:Thank you, if you find fault in anything please let me know. This is my first work in English, so there's a lot of errors in the sentence.

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Cheers_everyoneLv11Cheers_everyone

If the story were meant like SAO, I liked SAO by the way one of the first animes I watched, you could consider trying to do their first episode. like the protagonist cannot disconnect directly. It's more engaging this way

2yr

SidisLv15Sidis

nice chapter

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