Comments of chapter undefined of Arcandria Online : The Best Summoner Online (English Version)

unfortunately this author is struggling with English as a second language. I applaud his gumption but his allegories and storyline are broken and incomplete. Makes for a confusing read. I had high hopes because I Like this genre sadly it's too broken to enjoy for me. Please do a bit more research on interpretation and re-edit. I'm looking forward to it.

I think it's good but not catching enough. If I were to read a story like this, I would skip directly to the inciting incident

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nice chapter

yah saya tahu karena ini pertama kali saya nulis inggris

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