Comments of chapter undefined of The Extra's Return

The plot is a bit bland. I would have preferred to go loose and would accept the offer of Baron directly while asking for a lot of money, equipment and things. Or if they have murderous thoughts, then I would have stayed in the house and cultivated till I reached enough state where I am a powerhouse before doing the first clause and go into hiding, change my appearance and things.

he did not eat?

The chapters are rough in quality. As in there are a number of grammatical errors and issues with sentence structure, but I really like where this is going so far. It has potential so I hope to see this novel grow and develop into something more.

Poligamy?

he has no passion for life even though he has been given a second chance, very bland

thanks for the chapter