Comments of chapter undefined of Pokemon: The Tale of A Legend

Dropped? . Honestly MC doesnt act like a guy whos in his second life. With his mental age, he should be more calm, cunning and stable (?). But he isnt at all. Hes a hot blooded guy. Hes like a definition of a loud guy like Ash. Its even weird with him being that friendly with his classmates. Imagine youve got the mentality of like a 20+ guy and you hang out with 8 year olds like theres nothing wrong. The family sweet talks are kind of cringey but guess Author wants to emphasize family love here. Didnt like the starting pokemon either, Magmortar for a pokemon surely is a pure power and destructive helper but was really hoping for a speedster type. The park thing too, it was dark. Hated it. Makes me question why prof sycamore didnt leave any pokemon of his tp secure the children. Ofc, because the Author wants some kind of force scene tp motivate the mc. Theres a hidden undercurrent too that involves mc but this kind of plot isnt in the anime right? Other than that, everything is good.

I found this book by chance but I'm quite happy I did!! Keep up the quality of your work and I am sure you will go far!

dropped?!?😭