Comments of chapter undefined of Guardian's Lure [Game Maker System]
Guardian's Lure [Game Maker System]
TrueGuardian32
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wDuckieLv13wDuckie
I like it, though when was it mentioned that he wanted a hero team? I don't remember if it was mentioned in other chapters.
TrueGuardian32AuthorTrueGuardian32
I removed the previous chapter, when wild with my previous ideas, cleaned up the non chapters and then tada. We got this chapter, and I am LOVING IT. It's got better continuity and a more fielded MC and a new reoccurring character. As well as getting the SI to focus more on the non-gaming aspects of the system.
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