Xuefang1
I will admit at first it was a rough start with the story but as you can do that better and better and I've come greatly enjoy every chapter you come out so I'm here to tell you don't listen to any of their b******t they just want to put something there to make them sound smart or let them know where they're talking about they don't know a d*** thing if you love what you do with the story and keep doing it I for one will be here 100% supporting you
don't listen to them they just like to find a few things they dont like and then act like its the end of the world and call everything terrible plus the ones that complain dont ever make thier own stories to show that they can do better. while on the other hand there a some of us who honestly look forward to the next chapters just keep doing your best on doing your best and the one that enjoy your fanfic will continue to support you.
Some people just hate to hate when they could just stop reading and go to another fic. I like both of your stories and I've been here since the beginning, they have some problems but, there's not a story on this website or any other that doesn't. At least you're improving with time, unlike some people who don't know how hard it is to write. Keep up the good work and try to only really pay attention to the constructive criticism that people who want to help you out give. If you like to write then keep on writing and people will be here to read it.