Comments of chapter undefined of THE GÀMER : IN THE MULTIVERSE ( AU )

Ororo munroe Also known as Storm ( X-Men )

Ororo

I’m liking the story and humor of the characters, but the broken English is kinda frustrating. . . maybe try grammerly? I think it helps with sentence structure.

he has some trainig right? why can't he easily beat two untrained teenagers?

HE WAS AT MILITARY SCHOOL, RIGHT?! WHERE IS HIS CQC MARTIAL ART?? HE EVEN STILL LOSE FROM FLASH THAT CLEARLY HAVE NO MARTIAL ART!! TRASH MC

is your grammar getting worse or is it just me hard to make sense of it don't call him Mr peter its just peter instead of its in your head should be its in your hair

i don't understand why he could not easily beat some high school kids wen he was at military training

thx for the chapter😁👍🏼👍🏼

Thank you for the chapter.

thanks for the really great chapter

You should try to make things a lot more clearer, even though I could understand things, a lot of people might not

I've read that Grammarly has helped different people to improve their writing.

Hey Author please use comma's

thanks for the chapter. please find an editor or use some writing program. you not using "!" is mad annoying honestly

Ty

Sorry I tried my best... I really did but *Barf *Puke I'm out... Sorry

Thx for the chapter

Why am I still reading this ?? its killing brain cells

i didn't understand a thing