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And we'll return to Neptune on the next one, be prepared since the action is only starting, this was but a little taste, we still have a lot of things that have yet to fall in their right place : ) Enjoy it and seeya later at the pervert primordial.
So just to ask, would you be able to release faster if you had an editor? I'm not bagging on you but it would help to elevate your work to a higher level and I know from experience that editing your own work is challenging because you end up reading what you intended to write rather than necessarily what you did write. If you were able to establish a relationship with an an editor it would take a load off, though you might have to front load them with a few chapters so that it would make a real difference.
Barion_Trident:Well, I'm trying for them to be daily like before, worst case scenario they will be late like lately : )
loved the chapter .....can't wait for aurora reunion to be honest I'm enjoying this novel more than pervert primordial because it's pace is better.....just a little suggestions why don't you concentrate on a single novel per month so we can have both novels chapter releases at every other month or ever other week...
Sweet a nice and tidy way to finish this little part off. They might be relevant again later but we will see. It seems obvious that the scheming guy in Neptune has Karla's other half. Seems like they have been around for some time and changed quite a bit of history. One of my guesses is that it is using Annette and Melli's mother as a host. But that feels pretty weak currently. Using the body as materials is more likely. Can't wait to see what happens next. We have a Reunion between a family and an oh so glorious royal ball to attend. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]