So I finally corrected it, the action isn't over yet, so stay tuned, enjoy it and seeya later at the pervert primordial (and if everything goes well, second chap of this) : )
Srry, I accidentally posted the chap of pervert primordial here, I had changed it just a message of warning, DON'T UNLOCK IT PLEASE GUYS, I'll correct the chapter later.
Sorry for the inconvenience : )