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Comments of chapter undefined of Rise of The Withered Flower

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AliceElyse
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I’m going to be honest. I’m becoming a bit more interested in Aritish crown prince and his situation than fmc. I wouldn’t say this is a writing flaw exactly. I’m saying on a personal level the fmc is coming off so rigid in focusing only on whatever goal she is trying to accomplish no matter the cost that it’s making the parts with her in it as this story continues a bit stagnant. Everyone is flowing forward in new ways presumably from the previous timeline but she is still expecting everything else to flow the same as before. I don’t see her being flexible enough to flow with the changes. Also I honestly don’t understand why she is so revenge focused and isn’t trying to live a good life this 2nd time around. She could still save her family and keep rayan off the throne without throwing her whole life away. These are just my thoughts and feelings. I’m enjoying the story a lot. It’s different. I’m not saying the author needs to go back and change anything, I’m more so putting out the thought and caution to make sure the fmc doesn’t stay stagnant while everyone else around her are changing and may get the chance to fulfill potentials they didn’t know they could.

Frosby
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Thank you for your opinion! I tend to be a bit carried out away while focusing on one thing and maybe that's why😂 I will see what I can do and thanks for your support!

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kasmin21
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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola