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Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Mage with the Lust system

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Strongest Mage with the Lust system

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DaoisteFIaMW
DaoisteFIaMWLv15DaoisteFIaMW

Proud of you. The P.O.V. helps have more character development but it also slows down the pace it has its pro and cons

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Blizzard54k
Blizzard54kAuthorBlizzard54k

Haha. Thanks! Yeah. I was thinking of using this to give the female characters some depth. It won't slow down the pace much because there won't be many such chapters. I'll only use it when I think it's necessary.

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Avangard
AvangardLv4Avangard

This felt werid... Messing around with a pregnant woman after she just lost her husband a few hours before... Also with the fact he cares for her safety cause he killed her son and feels guilty about it... I hope she doesn't get added to the harem.

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Watersboy
WatersboyLv15Watersboy

Nice and Long POV but you cut the sauce

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LATRIDIA_BYRD
LATRIDIA_BYRDLv11LATRIDIA_BYRD

Yeah, change in Pov explained some of the undercurrents that would have been left to readers' imagination previously giving the scene more depths. Author should do this seldomly in the future, a good balance between that and the 1st person PoV will add more spice to the story.

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Ndaipori
NdaiporiLv13Ndaipori

Yes I liked the change of POV.

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Admiral_Alex
Admiral_AlexLv14Admiral_Alex

TFTC!

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Herasea
HeraseaLv14Herasea

thanks for the chapter, the new pov is nice wonder how max will react to the pregnancy.

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James_Bell_6276
James_Bell_6276Lv15James_Bell_6276

Switch in POV has always been good. Ella's now sounds like a major player as part of harem! Or not? I'm confused there! Seeing it from her viewpoint means she's becoming a wife, right?

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steeepppppddaaadddLv4steeepppppddaaaddd

nice chapter

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