Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Check it out bud: you've got good talent. Your skill level is very high, and for the most part, this is a good book. However, the thing keeping me from purchasing privilege is that your MC is weak. And I don't mean weak power wise. His mentality is weak, his commitment is weak, and his training progress is trash. You need to work on character building. If it improves in the future, at that point I will gladly purchase the privilege.