Comments of chapter undefined of Strongest Mage with the Lust system

Lilys so adorable

your idea and writing are great but your mc's character is bad hope he gets some character development as he still didn't learn from his mistake in past life and got cuucked

For a person who was betrayed, cucked and lived a poor life, isn't is very cheerful, optimistic and trusting? If not for the plot armor, I can see lily getting f*cked by his older brothers in the future.

I really like Lilly, she strikes me as a good and loyal woman

I dont really like mc who dont take advantage of their given cheat. He has it so why not make full use of it? He had a willing girl to try the system with. Not to mention him being rich. Can just go to a red light district or something to grind. If he dont want others finding out he can do it secretly. slaves is also a thing. Well im kinda ok with this pace and vibe until that one paragraph that he said ‘he want to rely on himself.’ Its ok to embrace the system in the beginning, after all he is weak. When he is strong then he can do things he want. Sigh...

so my point is, his emotions are very childish and seems forced..I hope the writing gets better and we see some character development.

Thanks for the chap

Thank You For The Chapter ❤️❤️

yeah abit force but it's ok

;D

thanks for the chapter

The spaces are too much

Is he going to act like a jerk the whole story?

Thanks for the chapter

thnks4chp