Comments of chapter undefined of Skyrim: A Dragon's Humanity

The pace feels good, if you accelerate a lil bit more it's going to ruin the good vibe that is right now... So please, acommodate youreself with this pace and fill in with more details and a bit more of slice of life (for the sake of us getting to know better the other characters!) Anyway, great fic! Just needs some revisions cuz there's been some grammar mistakes here and there.